A country of painters
I do not travel by the Mumbai local trains often these days. But just the other day I had an opportunity to do so. Waiting at the Charni Road station at an off-peak hour I saw an empty, mauve coloured train passing by idly, probably returning to the yard. For those who are not from Mumbai city, would like to inform that in the last few years, the dull brick-red rakes have been replaced by warm mauve rakes and bright canary yellow rakes with brighter, better interiors.
I saw the sides of the rakes plastered with a great number of streaks of red and maroon, of different sizes and shapes. As the train advanced, I could notice that the sides of not one door or a window was minus the tobacco and paan streaks. The passengers had been generous enough not to spare a single one with fountains emerging from the oral route. The mauve base provided a perfect canvas for the display of people’s creativity. On second thoughts, I felt that the old dirty brown rakes were better; at least they provided a camouflage to some extent.
Why do we have to be what we are? Why do we have to indulge in such shameful acts? Those responsible for this must be a very small fraction of the masses. And they are the ones who decide what the city will look like. And it’s not just this city. Or only the local trains. Visit any city, any public place. Railway stations, compartments, government offices and hospital walls & corners, street walls, parks, you name it. Litter and tobacco stains will be the most prominent part of any facade.
And the same set of people on an overseas trip of a developed nation (if they are fortunate enough) will think ten times before spitting or littering. Or for that matter, even here they would refrain from doing so in a private office or hospital. In air planes. Do we spit in our own homes? Then why spit in a public place. Because it doesn’t belong to us? Says who?
How does it come to an end? Expecting the administration to be strict and put a tab on it is too much. It’s been tried before far too often. Besides, the administration has far bigger responsibilities (how successfully they manage to fulfil those is another topic of debate), than keeping a check on this national hobby of ours. I think it has to come from within us. We as responsible citizens need to put a stop to our zeal to display our creative abilities. The next time one of us decides to spits paan or tobacco, let’s pause for a moment and have a close look at the collage created earlier by some of our brethren and visualise how nice the place would have looked without the ‘Hussains’ of the world in action. And decide for ourselves what we want. The choice is ours.
Saturday, February 6, 2010
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Very nice reflective piece DJ! But I doubt the awakening of conscience among fellow Indians. The only thing that can stop such filthy habits is FINE
ReplyDeletethese painting are sponsered by government. our netas are very busy to earn more money. they dnt have time for good causes. popat(neta)sirf bolta hai karta kuch nahi. dj keep it up. dont worry. be happy.
ReplyDeleteVery well written and indeed what most of us would feel strongly about.. however, people who have this habit belong to all classes of society - educated as well as illiterate, rich as well as poor..and Mumbai-ites have an apathy towards such people in general.. I have experimented on this by telling the offenders or by looking at them scornfully/condescendingly.. there was even a telly ad to encourage people to respond that way...there are so many people in Mumbai that I have never seen the same person doing it again, but whether it put any dent in their conscience - who knows?? Just keep at it...
ReplyDeleteIts not just a few as you mentioned. And atleast on this one there is no divide between the haves and the have-nots. The rich and the not-rich do the same piicchak! I've witnessed back doors of high-end expensive cars open at red lights, to throw out the excessive red saliva on the roads. Its Indian culture, perhaps.
ReplyDeletenicely written, started off interestingly, then became a little too serious in tone. however, i was thinking on the same lines this morning, and i feel the problem is not the guys who spit or randomly break the law
ReplyDelete, they know they shouldn't but they still do it, and this would have been the same in any country, had the law enforcement not been so strict. it is a natural human tendency to do as they please, if there is no discipline. the fines should be very high. almost Rs 5ooo/- for spitting.
I feel we as people are very forgiving.Infact these acts have become a blind spot in our daily existence.Perhaps what can be done is a parallel of the "Dont drink & drive" initiative of the Mumbai Traffic Police. only in this instance, the person caught spitting be made to clean the entire area/face of a bogie PLUS be made to pay a fine.Or like abroad where a person is made to do community dervice, the offender in this case be inducted in the CLEANING squad and is made to clean "painted canvasses" under supervision during peak hours.
ReplyDeleteHi DJ
ReplyDeleteYeh Kadwa Sach hain. This also is a creation of our 'Chalta Hain' attitude. We see it happen every where, yet we hesitate to stop or question the impertinent Litter Bug/Paan Du. Raise a voice and make them hesitate. Let them realise that we cannot continue to be a nation of uncivilized Neanderthals. We may have evolved to wear clothes but still behave like our ancestors (who used to reside on trees).
True. Even expensive cars have the back seat passengers wearing the best attire yet do not think twice of splashing the tars with red betel juice. May be a public lashing is in order for all those who 'hoton ko karke gol... thook karte ho!'
We are ages away from a mind set. It does not take us to think again when we open a mint and chuck the pillow pack or a bus/train ticket to thrash it to the road.
May be we do not do such things at home but then it does reflect how messed up we are. SAD!
Well written Drums... keep that bitterness & angst. More Power to your keyboard. Sometimes do also cheer up with your funnies...
Cheers
Well said Dharamji. The 'oral route' is resposible for all malice. I saw the other day in TV that in China, they have a method to contain the spit/litter practice. A guy will be walking on the street watching everyone and fine them if you see anyone spit - Vinod
ReplyDeleteWell said. In fact I started off getting angry at the person who spits out of his vehicle window (truck drivers, car drivers, tempo drivers..). In fact they retaliate as if it was my mistake to point it out! So I have now changed tact recently and quite successfully too! I smile first and ask him how he is. The I ask a question: "Wouldn't it be better if we did not spit? Possibly the roads and our city will be cleaner. Don't you think so?" In 100% of the cases they have said sorry. Just to reinforce the point I add: "Maybe this is the first and last time that we will ever meet. But will you remember this and tell your friends too?" Mostly they agree and nod their head. I hope some good sense rubs off on them.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good posts!! Great indeed! Looking forward to more food for thought!